Trall Sho'chira
01-01-2008, 01:58 PM
Myself and Lucas have utttered this one between us for quite a while but never really put the nails in the coffin, at the moment there are 3 central character's Trall, Lucas and orak.
Orak Sho'chira worked in the ministry the librarian of prophesies, he was awarded such a title because of his abillities in divination. He made many many prophesies for them, but he became greedy and began to delve into the dark arts to improve his ability. This got him involved with the red robes, he met wendy Sho'chira in London they got married and produced Trall, then he put Trall and wendy into hiding and blinded Trall, why because he had prophesied his own death.
The only sense of it that he could see that Trall was there by hearing his murder shout "No Trall I have to do this" and secondly that he will die at Hogwarts. So to stop it from happening he knew that changing the smallest of things now it would mean that his death wouldn't happen, it was obvious that Trall had met his murderer at hogwarts (the murderer being Lucas but he doesn't know that) So Orak moved Trall and her mother to the artic waste's were Trall would remain hidden, to assure his survival he blinded Trall so that she wouldn't be able to leave the plaice and eventually lead Lucas to him.
He returned to the ministry to delve further into the dark arts and practice his chosen art collect very useful information for the robes. to which point he was notified of another with abillities equal to his own if not better, Fiona Montgomery, aka Madame Fiona of the Cards (34, when she died). He found her and killed her why? in an attempt to capture her talent and wrap it into his own, this is where the black crystal ball that bleeds comes in that Is Fiona's blood that pours from it (that was the idea a good while ago I didn't tell you Lucas because I thought you might enjoy it more when they found out some other way) The ball vastly improved Orak's ability's to the point he found himself under investigation by the mom, there was so much evidence against him he decided to leave. He faked his own death and spent a number of year's searching out all the people that knew him using memory charms to delete himself from existence, leaving only his ball to Trall in hope that she may one day learn how to use it.
Trall has been searching for her father so that she can find out why he decided to blind her, of course as far as she know's he's dead.Irony is that the reason she is searching for him is to find for what reason he decided to blind Trall.
The book mentioned in what else can one do in the library is the last reference to Orak's existence, possibly goes to retrieve the orb as well his robe boss tell him they need it for some reason to predict what becomes of hogwarts in the next few years or somehting. Orak and another bunch of Robes go to hogwarts for a raid or something I dunno a divination squad or something.
Lucas still needs to find who it is that killed his mother, may I suggest that he doesn't actually get a name but he know's that it's Trall's dad because of the orb. Orak goes into the library to find this book which effectively marks him to his name Lucas is there with Trall they realize who he is and why he's there. Lucas kills Orak, Trall does something not quite sure yet because I don't know how she would react.
I'm sure there's hole's in the plot line feel free to point them out so that I can correct them.
At the moment the plot is quite thin and yes focus's around Trall in particullar, I would appreciate it very much if people could twist there own plotline's referencing there history. *cough* Kel
Kel this is your bit
Kel's uncle was a good friend of Orak they knew each other via the robes and a shared interest in history of magic, possibly studied from that book together. The night that Orak set out to collect the blood of Lucas's mum Orak requested that Kel's uncle joined him as a highly trusted adivser. Kel's uncle was the one that set the spell on Lucas's cat temperance, essentially turning it into a walking time bomb that would pass it's curse onto the next owner of the cat, of course the cat was a family cat so the intention was to kill Lucas's dad as well but Lucas received the and moved to hogwarts before the timer went. To remove all evidence of the Montgomery's.
Admin's I request that I can create another character Orak he would only exist for the thread where he actually dies.
Orak Sho'chira worked in the ministry the librarian of prophesies, he was awarded such a title because of his abillities in divination. He made many many prophesies for them, but he became greedy and began to delve into the dark arts to improve his ability. This got him involved with the red robes, he met wendy Sho'chira in London they got married and produced Trall, then he put Trall and wendy into hiding and blinded Trall, why because he had prophesied his own death.
The only sense of it that he could see that Trall was there by hearing his murder shout "No Trall I have to do this" and secondly that he will die at Hogwarts. So to stop it from happening he knew that changing the smallest of things now it would mean that his death wouldn't happen, it was obvious that Trall had met his murderer at hogwarts (the murderer being Lucas but he doesn't know that) So Orak moved Trall and her mother to the artic waste's were Trall would remain hidden, to assure his survival he blinded Trall so that she wouldn't be able to leave the plaice and eventually lead Lucas to him.
He returned to the ministry to delve further into the dark arts and practice his chosen art collect very useful information for the robes. to which point he was notified of another with abillities equal to his own if not better, Fiona Montgomery, aka Madame Fiona of the Cards (34, when she died). He found her and killed her why? in an attempt to capture her talent and wrap it into his own, this is where the black crystal ball that bleeds comes in that Is Fiona's blood that pours from it (that was the idea a good while ago I didn't tell you Lucas because I thought you might enjoy it more when they found out some other way) The ball vastly improved Orak's ability's to the point he found himself under investigation by the mom, there was so much evidence against him he decided to leave. He faked his own death and spent a number of year's searching out all the people that knew him using memory charms to delete himself from existence, leaving only his ball to Trall in hope that she may one day learn how to use it.
Trall has been searching for her father so that she can find out why he decided to blind her, of course as far as she know's he's dead.Irony is that the reason she is searching for him is to find for what reason he decided to blind Trall.
The book mentioned in what else can one do in the library is the last reference to Orak's existence, possibly goes to retrieve the orb as well his robe boss tell him they need it for some reason to predict what becomes of hogwarts in the next few years or somehting. Orak and another bunch of Robes go to hogwarts for a raid or something I dunno a divination squad or something.
Lucas still needs to find who it is that killed his mother, may I suggest that he doesn't actually get a name but he know's that it's Trall's dad because of the orb. Orak goes into the library to find this book which effectively marks him to his name Lucas is there with Trall they realize who he is and why he's there. Lucas kills Orak, Trall does something not quite sure yet because I don't know how she would react.
I'm sure there's hole's in the plot line feel free to point them out so that I can correct them.
At the moment the plot is quite thin and yes focus's around Trall in particullar, I would appreciate it very much if people could twist there own plotline's referencing there history. *cough* Kel
Kel this is your bit
Kel's uncle was a good friend of Orak they knew each other via the robes and a shared interest in history of magic, possibly studied from that book together. The night that Orak set out to collect the blood of Lucas's mum Orak requested that Kel's uncle joined him as a highly trusted adivser. Kel's uncle was the one that set the spell on Lucas's cat temperance, essentially turning it into a walking time bomb that would pass it's curse onto the next owner of the cat, of course the cat was a family cat so the intention was to kill Lucas's dad as well but Lucas received the and moved to hogwarts before the timer went. To remove all evidence of the Montgomery's.
Admin's I request that I can create another character Orak he would only exist for the thread where he actually dies.